Image: Lee Friedlander, 1966 
Courtesy of Tess Kincaid 
shadows of you; of me
do you hear 
your name 
ride the wind, 
or see rain pelt 
each letter; 
have you 
sung the song 
of waking moments,
morning startled 
by opened eyes; 
do you know 
the blessing of pain
when it's gone, 
and heard the 
blue-glow serenity
of shallow breathing; 
have you 
felt the wind
become a breeze
before feathered
clouds on 
autumn's end; 
listen 
as I whisper 
memories of you
across your 
sleeping heart's 
ear...
Poem ©2011 R. Burnett Baker


now that is leaving one heck of an impression
ReplyDelete...the blessing of pain when it's gone
nice line
Lovely! I am so pleased you found such beauty in the prompt.
ReplyDeleteThis is really lovely, Rick! Thank you...
ReplyDeleteimagery with words at its best. just lovely.
ReplyDeleteLovely imagery!
ReplyDeleteI love how you invite the senses to participate in the imagery! Very nice...
ReplyDeleteThis is so touching. A decades-long friendship took a different turn recently when my friend passed away. This brought her back to mind and heart. Lovely.
ReplyDeleteThis is gorgeous!
ReplyDeleteRick, this is beautiful...
ReplyDeleteI love "blue-glow serenity of shallow breathing"
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely breathtaking! This is beautiful Rick!!
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