Sunday, May 23, 2010

Magpie Tales Photo Prompt Fifteen















perfect fit


we, too,
a perfect fit

like steel fish
swimming on
wood.




Poem © 2010 by R. Burnett Baker
Photo prompt courtesy of Willow from "Magpie Tales" blog.

13 comments:

  1. simple. brilliant.
    i got me a perfect fit.
    smiles.

    my magpie will be up in the morning.

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  2. Delightfully simple, yet beautifully effective. A great Magpie Tale :)

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  3. is that like getting along like oil and water?

    Perfect fit. What is that?

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  4. Will visit you tomorrow, Brian.

    Thank you much, Sam!

    Lisa, the perfect fit is just my little shot at cynicism!

    Thanks to all!

    Rick

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  5. Interesting - clever and yes a bit of cynicism thrown in for good measure, well written.

    Joanny

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  6. Short and a perfect fit to the prompt, a clever one again Rick!

    Christine

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  7. Witty, very witty, Rick. Sounds nice read out loud, too. I love it.

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  8. This very short piece gave me a very big smile!

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  9. my,my,my...always so much in your few words...
    No need of explanation..it just lands!

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  10. Very good..maybe the problem is trying to swim in the wrong medium?? Thanks...

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