And here's my rendering for Mag 105. Too late for anyone to read, but here goes! Cheers everyone!
Photo shared by Tess Kincaid
undone
even as we do
we leave much
undone, cutting
swaths of life-forests;
blazing paths
following leads
connecting dots
of drudgery and
anticipation;
pick-pocketing
every beautiful
moment:
pick
a number of days
to accomplish
your life,
then reason,
if you will, for the
ample calling of
that last breath.
Poem © 2012 R. Burnett Baker
Note: The theme for this poem was actually inspired by Steven, of The Golden Fish fame! Wonderful blog!
"Pick-pocketing every beautiful moment"....what an amazing line Rick!! This is a beautiful lesson of living life crafted into a brilliant poem. :-)
ReplyDeleteThat's the line that jumped out at me too! Nice one, Rick!
ReplyDeleteoh I loved that line too!
ReplyDeleteseems traveling to exhaution inspired a wonderful poem...
and Even as we do we leave much undone...loved that line too...
Welcome home dear friend
rest this weekend in familiar surroundings
suz
Love the connecting the dots...the pick pocketing...
ReplyDeleteconnecting dots of drudgery and anticipation...nice line to capture life...
ReplyDelete... and you thought there would be no one to read your poem ~~ guess again!!! Glad you are happy and home.
ReplyDeleteI just resigned from work and for 3 years of working, I am unsure whether or not I have accomplished something.
ReplyDeleteThanks for this share. You had me at
"pick
a number of days
to accomplish
your life"
This piece wrapped up my weekend.
Good flow and word choices in this - has some striking lines in it!
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