Sunday, August 12, 2012
Magpie Tales 130: Illusion
conch
you were my
desire.
breaking free was
your dilemma, but
one without a spirit
of deed, like a shell
in the sand.
"hold it to your ear,"
they say, "and you'll
hear the ocean," and
motherofpearl I did -
felt your breath,
tasted sea foam and
salt, swept along a
rip-tide of cresting
waves that whetted
paradise and
skin,
striking echoes of
hollow illusion and
emptiness.
Poem © 2012 R. Burnett Baker
Photo by Francesca Woodman, shared by Tess Kincaid.
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that whetted
ReplyDeleteparadise and
skin,
Just a beautiful response to this image!
Nice writing...
ReplyDeletenice...you bring a nice intimacy to putting that shell to ones ear...
ReplyDeleteOh my, your ending pretty much fits, life again and again sometimes doesn't it! I am so impressed with your header photo, gee that is something cool to bring words to paper. Stunning!
ReplyDeleteYour opening lines caught my attention...like the sounds of listening to it...including the echoes of emptiness ~
ReplyDeleteMotherofpearl! This is beautiful and bittersweet...
ReplyDeleteyou made a beautiful poem out of that image
ReplyDeleteIridescent and oh so senuous, Rick. Thank you for sharing.
ReplyDeleteStirring memories of haunting seashell sounds evoked by this.
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