Image: Lee Friedlander, 1966
Courtesy of Tess Kincaid
shadows of you; of me
do you hear
your name
ride the wind,
or see rain pelt
each letter;
have you
sung the song
of waking moments,
morning startled
by opened eyes;
do you know
the blessing of pain
when it's gone,
and heard the
blue-glow serenity
of shallow breathing;
have you
felt the wind
become a breeze
before feathered
clouds on
autumn's end;
listen
as I whisper
memories of you
across your
sleeping heart's
ear...
Poem ©2011 R. Burnett Baker
now that is leaving one heck of an impression
ReplyDelete...the blessing of pain when it's gone
nice line
Lovely! I am so pleased you found such beauty in the prompt.
ReplyDeleteThis is really lovely, Rick! Thank you...
ReplyDeleteimagery with words at its best. just lovely.
ReplyDeleteLovely imagery!
ReplyDeleteI love how you invite the senses to participate in the imagery! Very nice...
ReplyDeleteThis is so touching. A decades-long friendship took a different turn recently when my friend passed away. This brought her back to mind and heart. Lovely.
ReplyDeleteThis is gorgeous!
ReplyDeleteRick, this is beautiful...
ReplyDeleteI love "blue-glow serenity of shallow breathing"
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely breathtaking! This is beautiful Rick!!
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