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Magpie Tales Photo Prompt 87: Universal Language
tangents
love prepared
a feast in
tangy tangents
of our fervor
in nearness
of even the
smallest view
of want
beyond our
needs.
Poem ©2011 R. Burnett Baker
Photo courtesy of Tess Kincaid
Hmmm...there are many ways one can go hungry or feast. Nice take.
ReplyDeletetangy tangents - another example of English spelling problems - no rule here, just memorization - the letter g indeed - say it soft but use it hard or as "f" when "h" is added, or even silent (trough, through). You could hate the English language. I think some do.
ReplyDelete"...the smallest view of want"...I love that...
ReplyDeletenot sure if you intended this but i read the post, had a pretty hearty breakfast and now am returning to leave a comment. you made me hungry, rick. lol
ReplyDeleteCool take on the prompt. I love "the smallest view of want."
ReplyDeleteDear Rick: Tasty dish indeed! "want" love "beyond our needs". Love does bat 900 take us way out of the ballpark into left field...past anything else baby! Love you NY state of mind! I LOVE NY!!! Chiccoreal
ReplyDeleteLove is a delectable dish!
ReplyDeleteLove it...love prepared a feast in tangy tangents of our fervor...I am afraid there was no love in my poem...
ReplyDeletepiquant lines here!
ReplyDeleteI guess I have to go with the majority: "the smallest view of want" is an absolute winner.
ReplyDeleteSometimes, the smallest of views are enough. :)
ReplyDeleteCheers,
Arnab Majumdar on SribbleFest.com
compact and apt.
ReplyDeletelovely micro-magpie tale.