Tuesday, October 18, 2011

Lips. Lips To Find You

Photo from Google Images


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behind the backdrop of now 
I'll bend and blend into the 
ethereal wisp of lips pressed 
and pulsed for one revealing 
moment of 

breath 
against 
breath. 

Poem © 2011 R. Burnett Baker 

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6 comments:

  1. Arnab MajumdarOctober 18, 2011 at 10:16 PM

    Have you heard 'Breathe' by Pink Floyd? You should. I think you'll enjoy that song... :)

    Interesting poem...

    Cheers,
    Arnab Majumdar on SribbleFest.com

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  2. citybuoyOctober 19, 2011 at 12:30 PM

    Wow, Rick! I so love the wordplay. It even feels good to read it out loud! :)

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  3. SuzOctober 19, 2011 at 3:20 PM

    smokin

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  4. Cheryl CatoOctober 19, 2011 at 5:00 PM

    What Suz said!!! Yahoo!

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  5. kenvOctober 22, 2011 at 11:55 AM

    I love the last part, it makes perfect definition of what a kiss is.

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  6. Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson BarryOctober 27, 2011 at 8:15 AM

    breath taking.

    Thanks for sharing.

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