water under the bridge
as it
flows
away,
it
arrives:
there is
no
past tense
in a
river.
Photo ©1998 Leslie Elias
Poem ©2011 by R. Burnett Baker
Saturday, April 9, 2011
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nice writing rick! steven
ReplyDeleteexcellent...nice play on water under a bridge...and yeah unlike us it does not flow back upstream...
ReplyDeleteI like that - 'no past tense in a river'. I also really like the photo. Thanks for both! A pleasure.
ReplyDeletePeter G.
Rick, your an incredible poet!
ReplyDelete*I always loves your comment. It feels like a sensual disease & gv me an unusual spirit. Thx 4 supporting, god bless! :-)
Wonderful photo; wonderful thought! The eternal Now of a river.
ReplyDeleteI wish we could just build a house of love over the river, and witness how things mundane flow underneath. But that's impossible, yet too magical to think about. Smiles.
ReplyDeleteLike the old saying goes, it's water over the dam.
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