Tuesday, January 25, 2011

Magpie Tales Photo Prompt 50: Up In The Air: Tell Me Where...



if it pleases



tell me where 
and I will go,
if it pleases 
my soul;

if my intuition,
for once, is not
restrained by 
idiomatic sensibilities.


Poem © 2011 by R. Burnett Baker 
Photo courtesy of Tess Kincaid, at Magpie Tales.

8 comments:

  1. sometimes intuition is the silent voice and sometimes the silenced. steven

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  2. Oh, but sensible does not always please.

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  3. Well once again you've hit the nail square on the head. Well said .... *sigh*

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  4. Yours are the words I find no words to describe... i mean the feeling they bring to me... such apparent simplicity SO full of ... volition.

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  5. Societal expectations can be so tedious.

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  6. "...idiomatic sensibilities." Sometimes, they're a good thing.

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  7. Oh, yes, this rings so true. Very nicely crafted.

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