patina
some call it patina.
I thought it was her
name. she calls it poor
and I say rustic, bars
and all.
but rustic won't
protect us from
the rain or wind;
nor will seams
between wooden
planks;
or cracks
in the door,
beneath rigid lace,
translucent as it is
lonely.
"don't step on
rusty nails," you
warn,
"they, too,
have patina."
Image by Daniel Murtagh
Shared by Tess Kincaid.
Poem ©2013 R. Burnett Baker
Quite the warning...
ReplyDeleteWhat Luster! thanks
ReplyDeletethis kitten'll scratch :)
ReplyDeleteInteresting direction, beautifully written.
ReplyDeletePatina is one of my favorite words ... love this poem!
ReplyDeleteNice one, Rick. I'm a lover of patina -- but in its place...
ReplyDeletepatina with a warning....
ReplyDeleteBeautiful write - love your words, love patina.
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
Lovely- and I too, must beware of those rusty nails as well!
ReplyDeleteMore than skin deep, I'd say, proceed with caution. Don't be fooled by the patina!
ReplyDeleteWAtch out...as if it's going to make a difference. Ouch! Nice.
ReplyDeleteA warning beautifully spoken Rick! :-)
ReplyDeleteDeliciously mysterious.
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