"The Meal", 1891 Paul Gauguin
Shared by Tess Kincaid
renderings
there must be
emotional significance
in how we place pillows
on a sofa,
or exhibit art
on walls,
angle our favorite chair,
or position food in bowls
on a table.
an emotive response
to arrangement tugs our sleeve
like a child asking the
same question repeatedly...
we cannot tear ourselves
away from these
solitaire efforts
of enlightenment,
inward renderings of self,
and quests for
significance.
Poem © 2012 R. Burnett Baker
oooo so nice
ReplyDeleteand true
Very nice read, Rick.
ReplyDeleteWe are all on a quest for "signicance". Liked this very much.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed the direction you went with this and the wording here:
ReplyDelete"there must be
emotional significance
in how we place pillows
on a sofa,"
and placement of "on a sofa," significant, how fitting! Great poem, Rick!
nice line breaks rick...and significance is something we all look for...and all carry, even things, but only if we are willing to see it...
ReplyDeletethoughtful observations-you obviously pay attention
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely, deep read this is. Very nice.
ReplyDeletean emotive response
ReplyDeleteto arrangement tugs our sleeve
There speaks an artist with an eye for composition...
Very precise rendering, Rick
ReplyDeleteLife is a tableau! Really liked this one...
ReplyDeleteI love the purposeful structures communicated through your poem, Rick. The phrasing flows with fluidity and warmth. Thank you for sharing this nice write. =D
ReplyDeleteI really connected with this poem; I sometimes think I am ocd but I it does matter how my life is arranged..
ReplyDelete... and this is why I embrace design!
ReplyDeleteThis really works for me. It ticks so many boxes comprehensively.
ReplyDeletewaah! poems like this makes me think. : )
ReplyDeleteOh this certainly struck a chord with me...insignificance frightens me...
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