Image by Sarolta Ban
Shared by Tess Kincaid
Airstrip One
Winston Smith is every person,
every corner, street, mall, lot,
motel hallway;
every elevator shaft, subway,
train, plane, bus,
taxicab;
each iWad is watching, from
phones, cameras, monitors,
smart, smart, smart;
let me duck into the room,
kill the lights quickly
before she fingers the brim
of my fedora-cloaked
bald life.
Poem © 2012 R. Burnett Baker
Smart write Rick...
ReplyDeleteLovely one. I am in awe.
ReplyDeleteWOW! Sooooo WOW!
ReplyDeletePoor Winston and his hat. :)
Great writing! Love the hat reference!
ReplyDeleteobscured
Clever to pick up the Orwellian feel of the picture prompt and then run with it so well.
ReplyDeleteSo it's Big Sister - nice one!
ReplyDeleteCreepy cool!
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteWander
http://wanderwithoutbeinglost.blogspot.com
This is good!
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
Shades of 1984...
ReplyDeleteP.S. how about turning off the double word verification to help us busy comment writers?
DeleteTrell....wish I could. I didn't turn it on in the first place. Seems that nearly every blog has that double thing, and I'm having a hard time reading it....
DeleteIt was all great, but this was stellar:
ReplyDeletebefore she fingers the brim
of my fedora-cloaked
bald life.