People of Chilmark, Thomas Hart Benton, 1920
Photo courtesy of Tess Kincaid
relativity
from the relevance of human experience
to the relativity of human endeavor
love defines everything, even hatred.
we need only to live its dimensions
through moments of our lives,
relative to the needs of ourselves
and of others.
Poem ©2011 R. Burnett Baker
Adapted from an essay titled "Breaking The Dynastic Cycle: China In An Interdependent World," by R. Baker, 1988, and
a comment by R. Baker 7-11-11 about love to a post titled "existence" by "citybouy".
good take Rick!..
ReplyDeletewell done!..
JJRod'z
love does define everything...living its dimensions...like that thought rick
ReplyDeleteWow, a citation! Thanks Rick!
ReplyDeleteIt's hard to logicize (wait, is that a word?) something that should be felt. If I were braver, I'd even say it's 100% intangible.
But I realize now that the question in my post should not be "do I exist because of his love?" it should be "am I relevant?"
captcha: undsperm (yes, all sentences should be punctuated with and sperm. haha)
'relative to the needs of ourselves
ReplyDeleteand of others' - this simply got my attention as it reflects realism that are most of the times not applied. There are always currents of deep wisdom in reading your words Rick. thank you and much pleasurable read.(:
Brightest blessings.
~Kelvin
"and of others" ...so true, Rick.
ReplyDelete— K
Kay, Alberta, Canada
An Unfittie's Guide to Adventurous Travel
the painting does seem to evoke a sense of the connections between man and man and perhaps man and sea. we all rely on each other to make it through, to find love.
ReplyDeletecool to drawn on 1988 rick! in my own cosmology, love is everything.... steven
ReplyDeleteLove how you have drawn on the interconnections of one to another.
ReplyDeleteDoes hatred sprout from a garden
ReplyDeleteof sparse love, or a tub of too much
affection, where we lollygag in too
much overkill; love defines hatred
like beauty defines bizarre and ugly.
Good piece, sir.
No truer words be said .. loved your take on the prompt!
ReplyDeletetq very much! :-)
ReplyDeleteVery wise words.
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
Thought provoking.
ReplyDeleteLove the certainty of this..I could embroider it on a scarf! Wow...
ReplyDeleteoh I love this....embroider one for me Lyn...
ReplyDeleteI like the use of the word 'dimension' here. I used to believe that life is fluid. Maybe that's for the age I am at right now. Only when I get to your sense of knowing and be able to discover the patterns of things past re-occurring, I'd probably understand that 'dimension' which you mention in this poem. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteLovely words.
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely: love defines everything. Pity hatred can stem from love, but it can. Nice post.
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